danielpatrickdossey 's review for:

Dorothy Must Die by Danielle Paige

I expected so much more from this book! I mean with a name like "Dorothy Must Die", who wouldn't be excited?? The plot is ok but the writing is horrible!
1.
a forced romance (girl meets guy, girl hates guy and guy hates girl, the first time they are alone,they kiss, which is 2 hours later even though they don't know/like each other)
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this main girl is unbelievably stupid. She went to a witch who puts her in a healing pool because the girl was hurt. The witch dunks her to make her fully heal, and she starts freaking out! She says,"I thought she was my friend, but then she betrays me like this!" WHAT THE HECK??? SHE JUST TOLD U IT WOULD HEAL YOU!! And the book is really cheesy and did I mention the horrible writing? She tries to make it suspenseful but I end up laughing many times at Danielle Paige's pathetic attempts to make this book exciting...This may be a premature review since I am not finishing this, but I feel that this writing and plot will not get any better.