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A review by guyro
James Potter and the Hall of Elders' Crossing by G. Norman Lippert
2.0
i dislike the americanisations brought into the authors harry potter fanfiction, but that might be personal taste.
I particuarly dislike that the author asks people to buy his books because writing his harry potter fanfictions costs "time and money" it only costs money because you let it Mr Author. many many thousands of harry potter fanfiction authors are donating their time for free, the bit that annoys me is that it only costs money because you make it so, you have decided to build a fancy dynamic website, you decided to get covers. other fanfiction authors dont do this and it is no reason for you to ask for money.
i like your writing of james. I find it very weird that you write ginny weasley as molly weasley, granted she will have grown up but if your going for that type of character why not just use molly weasley?
your story seems well planned and thought out with reasonably good writing.
if it wasn't for the glaring annoyances, i would rate this average to good. much better than alot of the drivel fanfictions (this has reasonably good writing) but along way off the very very good fanfictions
I particuarly dislike that the author asks people to buy his books because writing his harry potter fanfictions costs "time and money" it only costs money because you let it Mr Author. many many thousands of harry potter fanfiction authors are donating their time for free, the bit that annoys me is that it only costs money because you make it so, you have decided to build a fancy dynamic website, you decided to get covers. other fanfiction authors dont do this and it is no reason for you to ask for money.
i like your writing of james. I find it very weird that you write ginny weasley as molly weasley, granted she will have grown up but if your going for that type of character why not just use molly weasley?
your story seems well planned and thought out with reasonably good writing.
if it wasn't for the glaring annoyances, i would rate this average to good. much better than alot of the drivel fanfictions (this has reasonably good writing) but along way off the very very good fanfictions