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The View Was Exhausting by Mikaella Clements, Onjuli Datta
DID NOT FINISH: 29%

This felt like a chore to read. The writing was choppy, and the back and forth in time pieces felt disjointed and forced. I was into their current timeline but it had gone nowhere in the time I’d been reading bc of all the unnecessary flip flopping back to pieces of the past.