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Puck Me Secretly by Odette Stone
2.0
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

This is a book in desperate need of an editor. What is "reprehensible damage", for instance?I think it was supposed to be irreparable. Dialogue frequently consisted of characters saying a single word or maybe two to each other for a good portion of the conversation. 

The narrator did not read with any emotion other than what felt like anxiety. The dialogue was woefully stilted and awkward. 

You know when something is so bad you just can't look away? Yeah. That's this book. With a heavy edit and would probably end up being a moderate rewrite, it could be good. But right now it is not. 

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