stinggoblin 's review for:

The Girl from the Well by Rin Chupeco
3.0

I can see what other people mean when they say the narrative switches back and forth between first and third person. It is a little annoying. Overall it was a good story even if the story telling was not on point. About chapter 20 it feels like the writer got bored with this story. The description has come to a screeching halt. It seems more like "This happened, then this happened, and so now this is happening". I don't have a lot to go off of to paint a picture in my mind. There were some key plot points I predicted pretty early on.