lost_goddess 's review for:

For Whom The Belle Tolls by Jaysea Lynn

1.5

medium-paced

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It was bad. So, so bad. I almost quit at 12%, but then it picked up and hot interesting. At around 50%, it fizzled into mediocre fanfic type of writing. The characters did not grow or change. Lily was always insightful and good with people (but weirdly not while alive.) Bel was always sensitive and self aware. The demons are so very PC and woke. It's not a bad thing, but there was no real conflict. 

I don't know why I finished it, but I did. Never again.