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The Paper Magician by Charlie N. Holmberg
1.0

This felt quite juvenile. The action takes place too quickly before we even care about the characters. The love story doesn't belong. It was really repetitive. The main part of the story while she's in his heart seems completely pointless. I like YA fiction, and this wasn't necessarily billed as such, but it was too poorly done to enjoy.