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So first scene in the book basically our fmc’s ditsy friend is so excited to see our fmc she runs and hugs her and accidentally pushes her into a fountain but at the last second one of the mmc catches her with one hand… and it felt super wattpad-ish and cheesy.
Not only that but the same mmc who catches her is described like so “But he has one green eye and one icy white one covered by a gnarly looking scar from his brow to his cheek”
*I couldn’t roll my eyes hard enough*
we all know what Zade Meadows looks like
*If you don’t here is how Zade is described “His eyes. One so dark and bottomless. And the other an icy blue so light, it’s nearly white. A scar slashes straight down through the discolored eye”
and I’m sure we all wish we could’ve been the ones to create him, but we are not. Be original.
DNF
Not only that but the same mmc who catches her is described like so “But he has one green eye and one icy white one covered by a gnarly looking scar from his brow to his cheek”
*I couldn’t roll my eyes hard enough*
we all know what Zade Meadows looks like
*If you don’t here is how Zade is described “His eyes. One so dark and bottomless. And the other an icy blue so light, it’s nearly white. A scar slashes straight down through the discolored eye”
and I’m sure we all wish we could’ve been the ones to create him, but we are not. Be original.
DNF