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A review by maiagaia
His Bride for the Taking by Tessa Dare
fast-paced
1.0
This fell prey to the talking heads problem. Pages upon pages of blocks of dialogue with little to no description. It felt like reading a bad play.
The comedy in it fell incredible flat and added nothing. It was a waste of words that could have been used to build character and/or conflict.
The idea was promising but fell flat, and the final plot twist was pretty gross. Not much to say since it was so short, but I think its length was the only good thing about it.
The comedy in it fell incredible flat and added nothing. It was a waste of words that could have been used to build character and/or conflict.
The idea was promising but fell flat, and the final plot twist was pretty gross. Not much to say since it was so short, but I think its length was the only good thing about it.