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arialees_ 's review for:
The Six Olympians
by Maria Alarcon, Maria Alarcon
1) this story line is so interesting! i loved it.
2) the execution… not the best. it moved quickly and it was confusing.
i understand this came from a wattpad story but i expected more. the grammar was not the best, the way the story moved so quickly gave us no chance to understand what just happened and it was honestly confusing. the names made it so so so difficult to stay on track. i know there’s SIX of them but the fact that they were called by their 1) mortal first names, 2) mortal last names, and 3) their olympian names within one conversation made it hard to follow. also, all characters were SO similar, there was no distinction between them. i would forget whose POV i was reading and had to figure it out by eliminating the characters that weren’t named.
2) the execution… not the best. it moved quickly and it was confusing.
i understand this came from a wattpad story but i expected more. the grammar was not the best, the way the story moved so quickly gave us no chance to understand what just happened and it was honestly confusing. the names made it so so so difficult to stay on track. i know there’s SIX of them but the fact that they were called by their 1) mortal first names, 2) mortal last names, and 3) their olympian names within one conversation made it hard to follow. also, all characters were SO similar, there was no distinction between them. i would forget whose POV i was reading and had to figure it out by eliminating the characters that weren’t named.