A review by cgrindatti
Moonstruck by Lauren Dane

2.0

I don't know what I expected when I started this book. But, it certainly isn't what I got. The flow was awful. A section would start with a statement that implies more than one point, but then point two never came. The grammar wasn't too hot either. There were multiple sentences that I had to re-read just to understand what they were saying. Sometimes I thought it was just the fact that I am not from the south, and they obviously were. But it wasn't consistent enough for that to be the explanation. And the southern twang was annoying - either use it, or don't. Or, at least, be consistent about when to use it. "Y'all" would just pop up out of nowhere.

The only good thing about the book is that it made me curious enough to know what happens with the Pembrys to actually finish the whole thing. That is why I gave it two stars instead of one. I'm actually considering reading the next book just to find out.