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A review by trinnyroo
Haunting Adeline by H.D. Carlton

dark mysterious fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? N/A
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

1.75

Adult content written at a 3rd grade reading level. Poorly developed characters, glorification/excuse of r*pe, and the main character cusses like she's never been allowed to before. The plot is not interesting, and is clearly only there to move from sex scene to sex scene, which is to be expected of modern erotica, but still. So poorly written, I almost felt like I was reading fanfiction in middle school again. Characters have no clear motivation and have clearly not been thought through - I'm not entirely convinced the author has ever even met another human being before. If you told me this was written by either poorly trained AI or a 15 year old I would not be surprised. Genuinely one of the worst things I've ever read. 
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