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A review by chloebooktwt
The Heir and The Enchantress by Paullett Golden
1.0
I really hoped to like this book, but the writing is just average. It reminds me of Wattpad in a way: a lot of dialogue without really saying anything, boring characters, and descriptive of only the love interest. The plot moved fast and was very confusing at times. There was a lot going on, but it felt really flat. The book is unnecessarily drawn out. I felt like I was done with it only 10% in. I wanted to like it, but it fell short.
Hazel is 17 years old and still childish. I didn't like her character at all, but Harold wasn't an up-side either. Both characters were flat and without any charms.
Writing examples:
"A pregnant pause," was used to describe a long pause between dialogue. This just felt icky in a sense. I did not enjoy reading that at all.
Nana also described sex as "it tickles in all the right places," which made the character and myself uncomfortable to read.
Hazel is 17 years old and still childish. I didn't like her character at all, but Harold wasn't an up-side either. Both characters were flat and without any charms.
Writing examples:
"A pregnant pause," was used to describe a long pause between dialogue. This just felt icky in a sense. I did not enjoy reading that at all.
Nana also described sex as "it tickles in all the right places," which made the character and myself uncomfortable to read.