aschuemusic 's review for:

Good Elf Gone Wrong by Alina Jacobs
2.0

Woof, that was a rough one. First off, this book did not need to be OVER 500 pages, the repetition was exhausting. I have never read a more spineless walked over FMC. Her family treated her like garbage for years and she didn’t stand up for herself until the last 75 pages of the book. The spice was cringe, the MMC while brooding and attractive was exhausting with his inner monologue and the whole story felt like it was slapped together. Chapters, thoughts and the story progression was soooo choppy I found myself pushing through just to say I finished it. It had a lot of potential and a fun plot but the execution was ROUGH.