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A review by outsyinsy
A Lady's Lesson in Scandal by Darcy McGuire
adventurous
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.5
A spicy Regency (well, Victorian, it looks like) romance with wallflower femme fatales? Sounds like a fun time. The book's first half was quite entertaining, though the evil stepmother trope felt somewhat overdone. Millie, the main female character, was interesting. I liked that she was not some delicate English rose, and the main male character, Drake, was an actual war hero with the scars to prove it.
Unfortunately, I didn't like many of the other elements of this book. The book was fast-paced when it came to the romance, to the detriment of the criminal investigation subplot, which felt more tacked on and didn't seem to have a clear resolution at the end. The main characters' inner thoughts regarding their love interest were repetitive, with maybe some throwaway lines about the investigation to remind us it's still going on. Actually, it felt like, aside from the romance, many of the other characters and situations felt more like throwaways. The best friend from the start of the book doesn't make another appearance until more than halfway, and only so she could trauma-dump on our FMC, and it's never explored again. The evil stepmother exists pretty much to be evil and not add much else. Our main characters obviously finally get together in the end, but what of the investigation? Eh, who knows? Certainly not the reader.
Another nitpick that had me nearly deciding to DNF this book was the author's preference to cut sentences into sentence fragments for emphasis. For example: He was in the middle of a complete mess. Thanks to his lack of control. Which was clearly Miss Millicent's fault.
It very much smacks of amateurish writing I've seen from some fanfiction. Surely there are other ways one can write to make some kind of point?
Unfortunately, I didn't like many of the other elements of this book. The book was fast-paced when it came to the romance, to the detriment of the criminal investigation subplot, which felt more tacked on and didn't seem to have a clear resolution at the end. The main characters' inner thoughts regarding their love interest were repetitive, with maybe some throwaway lines about the investigation to remind us it's still going on. Actually, it felt like, aside from the romance, many of the other characters and situations felt more like throwaways. The best friend from the start of the book doesn't make another appearance until more than halfway, and only so she could trauma-dump on our FMC, and it's never explored again. The evil stepmother exists pretty much to be evil and not add much else. Our main characters obviously finally get together in the end, but what of the investigation? Eh, who knows? Certainly not the reader.
Another nitpick that had me nearly deciding to DNF this book was the author's preference to cut sentences into sentence fragments for emphasis. For example: He was in the middle of a complete mess. Thanks to his lack of control. Which was clearly Miss Millicent's fault.
It very much smacks of amateurish writing I've seen from some fanfiction. Surely there are other ways one can write to make some kind of point?