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A review by melg14
Collide by Riley Hart
3.0
3-3.5 stars
I’m a little disappointed with this book after reading “Broken Pieces”.
One major problem I had was the editing, or rather the LACK OF editing. All those grammatical errors were so distracting.
I also thought their relationship at the beginning was rushed/glazed over as if them having history—that we barely got—made up their easy chemistry. It was almost lazy writing on that part. The word for this book that continues to come up is lacking. This book just lacked a lot of things. But be sure that there is no lack of winks (like do people actually wink these days).
However, I liked how realistic and lengthy Coopers feelings/thoughts were when questioning his sexuality. Many mlm stories I’ve read with similar aspects had the character quickly accept their new sexual awakening without the doubts and surprise.
Overall I still enjoyed the book.
I’m a little disappointed with this book after reading “Broken Pieces”.
One major problem I had was the editing, or rather the LACK OF editing. All those grammatical errors were so distracting.
I also thought their relationship at the beginning was rushed/glazed over as if them having history—that we barely got—made up their easy chemistry. It was almost lazy writing on that part. The word for this book that continues to come up is lacking. This book just lacked a lot of things. But be sure that there is no lack of winks (like do people actually wink these days).
However, I liked how realistic and lengthy Coopers feelings/thoughts were when questioning his sexuality. Many mlm stories I’ve read with similar aspects had the character quickly accept their new sexual awakening without the doubts and surprise.
Overall I still enjoyed the book.