A review by cestrella
Mine To Hold by Natasha Madison

Did not finish book.
Dnf.

I was tempted to drop this by page 30 when I read this paragraph. It stood out so much against all the other writing.

I shake my head and get up to slip out of my dress when my phone beeps from the bed. I pick it up, not knowing that it will change the course of my life. I pick it up, not expecting that at that moment, my whole life is going to change. I pick it up innocently. The only thing going through my mind is me walking down the aisle. I pick it up with a smile on my face when I see it's from Joseph, and it's an email. My finger hovers over it as I press the notification to open it, and just like that, my house of cards comes falling down!

But I made it all the way to 40% when I decided I to give it up. The characters were banal, the writing was meh.

Merged review:

Dnf.

I was tempted to drop this by page 30 when I read this paragraph. It stood out so much against all the other writing.

I shake my head and get up to slip out of my dress when my phone beeps from the bed. I pick it up, not knowing that it will change the course of my life. I pick it up, not expecting that at that moment, my whole life is going to change. I pick it up innocently. The only thing going through my mind is me walking down the aisle. I pick it up with a smile on my face when I see it's from Joseph, and it's an email. My finger hovers over it as I press the notification to open it, and just like that, my house of cards comes falling down!

But I made it all the way to 40% when I decided I to give it up. The characters were banal, the writing was meh.