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A review by venusinfauxfur
Most Ardently by Gabe Cole Novoa
hopeful
reflective
fast-paced
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
1.75
Unfortunately, this book really didn’t do it for me. I was very close to DNF-ing a few times, but pushed through since it was pretty short. This is not to say that it is at all a bad book; rather, I think it just hit too many of my pet peeves with both historical and trans-themed fiction. The historical anachronisms particularly frustrated me: e.g., historically inaccurate language, a tight-lacing scene (despite stays of the era being relatively unrestrictive), and, notably, a rather modern interpretation of transgender identity transposed over a historical narrative. While this is certainly a matter of personal preference (nor do I think authors should be expected to include period-accurate depictions of homophobia or transphobia), I felt that the narrative suffered as a result of this choice.
Everyone around Oliver seemed to, for the most part, immediately accept and understand his identity, which resulted in a general lack of narrative tension while simultaneously feeling unrealistic even from a contemporary trans lens. The language used in his various coming-out scenes felt extremely cookie-cutter (e.g., “I love and support you”) and was delivered with little hesitation; there were no hiccups, no fumbles, no awkwardness, no lapses in understanding. While I could maybe see this as some kind of wish-fulfillment fantasy coming out scenario, it honestly felt kind of alienating to read as a trans person myself. I would have found it far more compelling if we were able to see Oliver truly struggle to understand where he fits (or does not fit) into conventional narratives of gender, familial expectation, and high society (this is, after all, what makes Lizzy Bennet so lovable in the original Pride & Prejudice). It also would have been interesting to see him come to terms with his identity without necessarily having language to easily voice it—as was the case for many queer historical figures.
Oliver does obviously suffer myriad sexist and transphobic remarks, though these often felt painfully on-the-nose (the “beautiful birthing hips” comment comes to mind). Most of his struggle as a trans person seemed to be rooted in heavy-handed sexism, without ever really addressing the more nuanced crossover between his dysphoria as a trans person and his experience living as a “woman” in Edwardian society.
In addition, the short length of the book makes the romance between Oliver and Darcy feel very insta-lovey, again hindering the potential for narrative tension and making the ending much less satisfying than that of Austen’s original novel. Neither of their characters felt very fleshed-out by the end, which left me feeling rather apathetic when it came to their ultimate confessions of love. At the end of the day, I can imagine many people loving this book, but as a trans Pride & Prejudice fan, I came out of it feeling disappointed.
Everyone around Oliver seemed to, for the most part, immediately accept and understand his identity, which resulted in a general lack of narrative tension while simultaneously feeling unrealistic even from a contemporary trans lens. The language used in his various coming-out scenes felt extremely cookie-cutter (e.g., “I love and support you”) and was delivered with little hesitation; there were no hiccups, no fumbles, no awkwardness, no lapses in understanding. While I could maybe see this as some kind of wish-fulfillment fantasy coming out scenario, it honestly felt kind of alienating to read as a trans person myself. I would have found it far more compelling if we were able to see Oliver truly struggle to understand where he fits (or does not fit) into conventional narratives of gender, familial expectation, and high society (this is, after all, what makes Lizzy Bennet so lovable in the original Pride & Prejudice). It also would have been interesting to see him come to terms with his identity without necessarily having language to easily voice it—as was the case for many queer historical figures.
Oliver does obviously suffer myriad sexist and transphobic remarks, though these often felt painfully on-the-nose (the “beautiful birthing hips” comment comes to mind). Most of his struggle as a trans person seemed to be rooted in heavy-handed sexism, without ever really addressing the more nuanced crossover between his dysphoria as a trans person and his experience living as a “woman” in Edwardian society.
In addition, the short length of the book makes the romance between Oliver and Darcy feel very insta-lovey, again hindering the potential for narrative tension and making the ending much less satisfying than that of Austen’s original novel. Neither of their characters felt very fleshed-out by the end, which left me feeling rather apathetic when it came to their ultimate confessions of love. At the end of the day, I can imagine many people loving this book, but as a trans Pride & Prejudice fan, I came out of it feeling disappointed.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Deadnaming
Moderate: Transphobia, Sexism, Homophobia, and Outing