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2.0

I got to page 259. I can't finish this story. It's incredibly boring, the magic system doesn't make sense, and the characters have no personality. I love that Elisa is different from usual protagonists, but the difference dwindles away after traveling from point B to C. I can't connect to any of the characters, and if I don't connect I don't consider a story worth reading. Because I don't care what happens to them.

I want to like it. Elisa does some incredible things and develops throughout the narrative. But the story is disengaging. Maybe I just wasn't in the mood for a story like this, but I don't think I'll ever finish.