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The concept for this story was really great, but it had one of the most annoying main characters that I've ever read. Danica was whiny and selfish to a point even past the typical YA main character standard. She never earned sympathy, interest, or investment from me... and the same was true for her love interest. They were both incredibly boring.
And so was their "chemistry."
Characterization in general was very bland, and left much to be desired.
As I said, the idea was really unique and interesting. I loved the futuristic-yet-historical world, and the original Breaking Bad-meets-Running Out of Time outline... but the characters kind of killed it.
And so was their "chemistry."
Characterization in general was very bland, and left much to be desired.
As I said, the idea was really unique and interesting. I loved the futuristic-yet-historical world, and the original Breaking Bad-meets-Running Out of Time outline... but the characters kind of killed it.