losingsanityoverfictionalmen 's review for:

Illusion of Stars by Sarah Marie Page

DID NOT FINISH: 22%

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Mostly I didn't feel like reading. Also there were way too many worldbuilding incongruities. The FMC felt too naïve for her role and ambitions, and

the death of the friend

felt rushed. Finally the dialogue felt way too modern. There was no understandable power chain nor did the characters use any type of reverence when talking to peole of higher status.