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A review by thewordsdevourer
The Watchmaker of Filigree Street by Natasha Pulley
emotional
mysterious
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
2.5
rly rly wanted to like this more, but the watchmaker of filigree street doesnt live up to its full potential w/ its lack of focus on stuff that could make it great - ie thaniel and mori's (happier) time(s) tgt - and what it does focus on could be handled even better.
there are a number of plot threads in the novel - yard bomb mystery, mori's ability, grace's conundrum - and imo the way they intersect could be improved. there also loose ends to some of the plot points, such as how grace's experiments in oxford end. things should be elucidated more arent, and pulley spotlights the duller stuff instead.
my biggest caveat, however, is how unsatisfying the book is as a whole bc of its dull focus on mori and thaniel. the story's emotional stakes and reader's engagement, as well as emotional payoff at the end could be much greater and fulfilling if thaniel and mori's interactions are shown more. them ending up tgt isnt surprising but how it gets there doesnt rly have any good buildup; more scenes of their down time tgt or deeper bonding could fix that, but it isnt rly shown in the book. that subtle, gently moving scene in the hospital near the end, i want more of that!
nevertheless, the premise is intriguing and the intellectual, technical stuff is intelligent, if a bit of a mindfvck for my kinda dumb self. the setting that mixes victorian london w/ steampunkish elements and japanese culture is quite original too, tho the latter comes off awkwardly at times. i also enjoy mori and thaniel as characters.
tldr: a potentially good read weighed down by its unwieldy execution and lack of focus on the good stuff.
there are a number of plot threads in the novel - yard bomb mystery, mori's ability, grace's conundrum - and imo the way they intersect could be improved. there also loose ends to some of the plot points, such as how grace's experiments in oxford end. things should be elucidated more arent, and pulley spotlights the duller stuff instead.
my biggest caveat, however, is how unsatisfying the book is as a whole bc of its dull focus on mori and thaniel. the story's emotional stakes and reader's engagement, as well as emotional payoff at the end could be much greater and fulfilling if thaniel and mori's interactions are shown more. them ending up tgt isnt surprising but how it gets there doesnt rly have any good buildup; more scenes of their down time tgt or deeper bonding could fix that, but it isnt rly shown in the book. that subtle, gently moving scene in the hospital near the end, i want more of that!
nevertheless, the premise is intriguing and the intellectual, technical stuff is intelligent, if a bit of a mindfvck for my kinda dumb self. the setting that mixes victorian london w/ steampunkish elements and japanese culture is quite original too, tho the latter comes off awkwardly at times. i also enjoy mori and thaniel as characters.
tldr: a potentially good read weighed down by its unwieldy execution and lack of focus on the good stuff.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Sexism and Racism
Moderate: Injury/Injury detail and Violence
Minor: Death