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ericachin5 's review for:
Five Brothers
by Penelope Douglas
It took me a bit to get into it and I wondered if I wouldn’t finish … but it got good!
Penelope Douglas does GOOD Smut. Very hot and intense. But a few lines were ridiculous. When Macon says “I don’t want you to be like a mom. I want you to be like a girlfriend.” … just. It felt so juvenile from some an intense guy. He could have said woman …
And maybe this is a critique for the narrator but Krisjen’s inner narrative seemed so different than what Krisjen’s outter was.
Overall it was totally solid and I do love a brooding, dark male lead.
Penelope Douglas does GOOD Smut. Very hot and intense. But a few lines were ridiculous. When Macon says “I don’t want you to be like a mom. I want you to be like a girlfriend.” … just. It felt so juvenile from some an intense guy. He could have said woman …
And maybe this is a critique for the narrator but Krisjen’s inner narrative seemed so different than what Krisjen’s outter was.
Overall it was totally solid and I do love a brooding, dark male lead.