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A review by myzanm
Nighttime Wishes by M.A. Church
3.0
I liked some parts more than others.
The alien, Ziang, was an ok character. I could get why he acted the way he was. Shawn was harder. He was like two different characters. First the scared noncooperative guy who at least tries to question Ziangs actions. Then he switches to this lovey-dovey mellable guy who agrees to everything Ziang says.
The tentacle sex was not a big deal for me. It was more like a conventional sex scene, and not that good either.
What bothers me most was the bad editing. I mean how can an editor not catch that a scene is used twice?
All in all this was an quick ok read.
The alien, Ziang, was an ok character. I could get why he acted the way he was. Shawn was harder. He was like two different characters. First the scared noncooperative guy who at least tries to question Ziangs actions. Then he switches to this lovey-dovey mellable guy who agrees to everything Ziang says.
The tentacle sex was not a big deal for me. It was more like a conventional sex scene, and not that good either.
What bothers me most was the bad editing. I mean how can an editor not catch that a scene is used twice?
Spoiler
I'm referring to the scene where Ziang teaches Shawn how to use their technology. The first is when they're still in Shawns house waiting for the retrieval. The scene is then repeated after they arrive on the spaceship. The wording of that scene is almost exactly the same.All in all this was an quick ok read.