A review by techknitly
The Whizz Pop Chocolate Shop by Kate Saunders

2.0

I was hoping this would be better than it actually was. Firstly, I had issues with the narrator who somehow managed to make 11 year old characters sound like tea drinking old women. She was definitely more talented at doing voices for adults yet gave a character from Jamaica a Scottish accent. Really? The story had a lot of potential, chocolate that makes you immortal? How awesome does that sound? But the execution was frankly ridiculous. The villain was not very villainous and at times he was just sad. Too many strange characters and weird episode that seemed to have nothing to do with the plot at all. Someone should have reined this author in to make this story easier to follow.