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The Alchemy Of Moonlight by David Ferraro
3.0
dark mysterious sad slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

I love the poly rep. But the writing was subpar and the conversations felt very forced. 
The first half took too long and the last third was a speed run. And weirdly only the last 100 pages were kinda spooky and also gory?? Like pretty extreme? 
Anyway, weird book and I didn’t hate it and i think it has potential but the execution was not there.