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A review by quesaleah
Private Charter by N.R. Walker
2.0
It started off well, but this thing really just sank lower and lower the longer it went on. There was some initial spark in the main characters, but eventually they became almost indistinguishable from one another. Along with the fact that the alternating first-person POV rarely included names (just "I" and "he" to reference the other MC), I had absolutely no idea who was narrating for most of the time I was reading this. I had to go back to the first page of the chapter to check whose POV it was...every chapter.
I liked it up to the point where they actually start to get to know each other, but this is a very brief section of the book. There's insta-attraction, which is obvs fine, but the way they're attracted to each other is so superficial that it's not believable at all. I mean, I can do unbelievable if it's interesting, but the setting and descriptions of their days on the yacht got so fucking repetitive and tedious.
I'd lost interest by the first time they got together. Welp. I tried. Got to ~55% and couldn't do it anymore. I skimmed the rest.
2 stars.
I liked it up to the point where they actually start to get to know each other, but this is a very brief section of the book. There's insta-attraction, which is obvs fine, but the way they're attracted to each other is so superficial that it's not believable at all. I mean, I can do unbelievable if it's interesting, but the setting and descriptions of their days on the yacht got so fucking repetitive and tedious.
I'd lost interest by the first time they got together. Welp. I tried. Got to ~55% and couldn't do it anymore. I skimmed the rest.
2 stars.