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Feedback by Robison Wells
2.0

None of the characters had personalities. The story itself could have been interesting, but it wasn't executed well. It didn't make sense in a lot of places. and..it had the worst end I've read in a long time.. Made no sense, seemed disconnected, the ”battle” didn't have much conflict, the bad guy was unbelievable and gave up almost instantly and for no good reason.

Still..it could have been worse.