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Secrets in the Mist by Morgan L. Busse
3.0

The storyline was so cool, literally could have been one of the greats but the writing just didn’t make sense to me. The storyline would jump around, things would just be stated instead of explained. I know it’s just book one, but there were times where the story should’ve been explained more, and I think the author could’ve alluded some more time to that.
It’s such a bummer because the premise absolutely enthralled me, maybe I’ll pick the second one up and see if the writing improved with so much of story board already being in place.