A review by gabriellaconley
On the Line by Naomi Loud

3.0

okay ozzy is hot! i had to let that be known first now, i am not down for the cheating even if it was great and deserved. i was not down for how they just continued to hide things from each other which was just effectively hurting the other more. i think that there were so many issues that could have been fixed by talking. also they do somno and wtf! like no kink shame here girl who cares but like with the whole rape thing it felt wrong and inappropriate and creepy and i just think the book would have been just fine without it. you were good but i was waiting for you to be better