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A review by rach94
Blood on Her Name by B. Nacole
adventurous
medium-paced
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
*I won a digital copy of this book in a giveaway.*
I can see the author's potential with writing, but this book needs lots and lots of editing. The sensitivity and beta reading was very much not enough. (And I say this as someone who's currently studying with a publishing company.) For the author: if you need to, make sketches of where the characters are in certain scenes, of the rooms (stick figures are enough), there were just too many of them that I had to re-read quite a few times because I kept getting lost until I just started skim-reading those scenes and that's a pity. But I get it, this was self-published without a team behind, so I won't be giving it a rating.
I can see the author's potential with writing, but this book needs lots and lots of editing. The sensitivity and beta reading was very much not enough. (And I say this as someone who's currently studying with a publishing company.) For the author: if you need to, make sketches of where the characters are in certain scenes, of the rooms (stick figures are enough), there were just too many of them that I had to re-read quite a few times because I kept getting lost until I just started skim-reading those scenes and that's a pity. But I get it, this was self-published without a team behind, so I won't be giving it a rating.