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A review by rayne
Sugar & Salt by Pavarti K. Tyler
2.0
I read this as a part of the Red Hot Beginnings Box Set.
The story was ok - it had some storyline which kept my interest. I just felt that there was something forced about the writing. It was almost like the writing didn't have a natural flow. I tried to connect with the characters and get into the main characters personality as the whole premise of the story had promise .. I also found the swearing a little off putting as it just didn't seem totally necessary in parts - especially the c* word.
The story was ok - it had some storyline which kept my interest. I just felt that there was something forced about the writing. It was almost like the writing didn't have a natural flow. I tried to connect with the characters and get into the main characters personality as the whole premise of the story had promise .. I also found the swearing a little off putting as it just didn't seem totally necessary in parts - especially the c* word.