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liv_thomas2205 's review for:
Veiled
by Michelle Areaux
DNF at 63% unfortunately.
This book had WAY too much telling and not enough showing. Being spoon fed every single line, emotion, observation and plot point… I stuck it out to 63% in the hopes it either got better or could be salvaged with a negative review but it’s difficult.
Not to mention it’s in need of serious revision and editing, given the grammar mistakes, spelling errors and general lack of consistency throughout the contents.
I’m gutted for the results of this book given that the premise was AMAZING and I was super excited for it…
This book had WAY too much telling and not enough showing. Being spoon fed every single line, emotion, observation and plot point… I stuck it out to 63% in the hopes it either got better or could be salvaged with a negative review but it’s difficult.
Not to mention it’s in need of serious revision and editing, given the grammar mistakes, spelling errors and general lack of consistency throughout the contents.
I’m gutted for the results of this book given that the premise was AMAZING and I was super excited for it…