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Onyx Storm
by Rebecca Yarros
WTF. And not in a good way.
Audio review. and there will be spoilers.
What was the point? Nothing happens. Nothing is resolved. I don't know any of these characters. Or places. Is there a map in the actual book? Cause I don't know where any of the places are. I rarely know where they are at any given time. I can't remember everyone's signet. Especially now that Everyone has 2. I don't even recall who is on the quest.
Characters are missing or not much screen time and others are thrown in for no reason. Where is Jesinia? rhiannon gets little screen time and really doesn't do much. Try to make a big deal of getting Sawyer back on his dragon....and then...crickets. Who TF is Quinn? And why do I care? For a minute I thought it was Imogen's gf but they are besties. So ok. Bye. Dain was getting interesting in IF. Sloan did one thing. Mira isn't satifactorily written IMO. Brennan does nothing but mend. HAlden was randomly thrown in for the jealousy aspect. Boring. I want more of Aaric. But he only shows up with the golden ticket when everything is dire.
As a nerd and bibliophile, I appreciated the scribe to rider transformation. In FW Violet is researching and quoting books from memory. What happened to that girl? Supposedly she is researching in this book. But all we see is her asking people if they know how to.... and they don't.
Random plot holes and devices are thrown in for no reason. Why does Violet not go to Aaric and ask questions? His signet was blatantly obvious. And smart girl doesn't pick up on it? And she let the dreamwalking thing go on and on. Seriously. Tairn poopoos her comment about it- last book? It all blurs together now. And then Andarna and he both know about her second signet but never bothered to tell her or discuss how it might be used?
WTF happened to Xaden. He was an interesting character. And now he is Tarzan. Me love Violet. No touch Violet. She mine. Blah blah blah. Boring. I skipped the cringy sex scenes. I know she is tiny and he is big dude. But in this one it mentions her shoulder bumps his elbow. Fw pages later they are holding hands. Um. That is like a parent holding a childs hand. That is not comfy. And how are they... I don't even wanna know. Ick. Not sexy in the least. Especially when war is happening. Don't need to know how horny you are every other page.
Violet gets one bad ass moment on the smart people island. Where has that girl been?
What was the point of the game of luck island? There was ZERO point of the gifts. Where is Broccoli?? Sure they got an army out of it. But we don't actually see them arrive. They talk about where they might station them. But it is never stated that said army arrived.
Andarna- huh? REally. She leaves. And then just pops back. And then is gone?
I don't understand the ending. I think the traitor thing didn't hit hard because I Don't Know Who He IS. I had to go look it up. Sure I recall hearing the name. But that's it.
What was the point of Jake? Jay? The venin kid. Why did they need to take him in the chest to Berwin? Who is that anyway. Is that the sage Xaden supposedly killed?
I really didn't get the point of Asher's books being left to Violet. Ddi that help? Was I just not paying attention by that point? Sigh. So he dedicated her to Dune? I guess I am not getting the implications. Or I just don't care
Audio review. and there will be spoilers.
What was the point? Nothing happens. Nothing is resolved. I don't know any of these characters. Or places. Is there a map in the actual book? Cause I don't know where any of the places are. I rarely know where they are at any given time. I can't remember everyone's signet. Especially now that Everyone has 2. I don't even recall who is on the quest.
Characters are missing or not much screen time and others are thrown in for no reason. Where is Jesinia? rhiannon gets little screen time and really doesn't do much. Try to make a big deal of getting Sawyer back on his dragon....and then...crickets. Who TF is Quinn? And why do I care? For a minute I thought it was Imogen's gf but they are besties. So ok. Bye. Dain was getting interesting in IF. Sloan did one thing. Mira isn't satifactorily written IMO. Brennan does nothing but mend. HAlden was randomly thrown in for the jealousy aspect. Boring. I want more of Aaric. But he only shows up with the golden ticket when everything is dire.
As a nerd and bibliophile, I appreciated the scribe to rider transformation. In FW Violet is researching and quoting books from memory. What happened to that girl? Supposedly she is researching in this book. But all we see is her asking people if they know how to.... and they don't.
Random plot holes and devices are thrown in for no reason. Why does Violet not go to Aaric and ask questions? His signet was blatantly obvious. And smart girl doesn't pick up on it? And she let the dreamwalking thing go on and on. Seriously. Tairn poopoos her comment about it- last book? It all blurs together now. And then Andarna and he both know about her second signet but never bothered to tell her or discuss how it might be used?
WTF happened to Xaden. He was an interesting character. And now he is Tarzan. Me love Violet. No touch Violet. She mine. Blah blah blah. Boring. I skipped the cringy sex scenes. I know she is tiny and he is big dude. But in this one it mentions her shoulder bumps his elbow. Fw pages later they are holding hands. Um. That is like a parent holding a childs hand. That is not comfy. And how are they... I don't even wanna know. Ick. Not sexy in the least. Especially when war is happening. Don't need to know how horny you are every other page.
Violet gets one bad ass moment on the smart people island. Where has that girl been?
What was the point of the game of luck island? There was ZERO point of the gifts. Where is Broccoli?? Sure they got an army out of it. But we don't actually see them arrive. They talk about where they might station them. But it is never stated that said army arrived.
Andarna- huh? REally. She leaves. And then just pops back. And then is gone?
I don't understand the ending. I think the traitor thing didn't hit hard because I Don't Know Who He IS. I had to go look it up. Sure I recall hearing the name. But that's it.
What was the point of Jake? Jay? The venin kid. Why did they need to take him in the chest to Berwin? Who is that anyway. Is that the sage Xaden supposedly killed?
I really didn't get the point of Asher's books being left to Violet. Ddi that help? Was I just not paying attention by that point? Sigh. So he dedicated her to Dune? I guess I am not getting the implications. Or I just don't care