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Cross My Heart by Avery Maxwell
1.0

Awkward, clumsy and poorly written. Backstory shoe horned in repeatedly to the narrative, no suspense/build to the relationship. Male MC is supposed to have an older child but doesn’t know anything (like nothing at all??) about raising his younger ones? Within 24 hours of the female MC starting a new job working in male MC’s home, the main characters are already trading explicit banter?