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Stay with Me by Alexandria House
2.0
slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

I want to preface this review with the fact that I appreciate the representation of black love, natural hair love  and the fact that Ryan, Angela and her family broke the stereotypical mold of black characters.  Alexandria House is a fantastic author and her prose are great, but this book didn’t work.  I understand giving side characters conflict, but not EVERY single one needs a traumatic backstory.  Also, as a black woman, I understand the idea of taking back the n-word, but I just hate it, even the n***a variation.  Every time someone used it, I was taken out of the story.  And then there was the fact that Angela and Ryan’s relationship was not fleshed out and every moment was boom-boom-boom; almost like she was attempting to hit the necessary plot points.  Ryan as our Hero was not a good hero.  I didn't root for him or his journey.  He was inconsiderate and gross from the beginning.  and after one or two scenes with Angela, he was a changed man.  

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