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Pretend You're Mine by Lucy Score
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3.75 Stars

Okay, not going to lie, I think this has been my least favourite Lucy Score book I have read at the moment. There were quite a few things that just didn’t sit right with me. The main one being I just felt like the pacing for this book was all over the place and it felt as though things moved way too quickly and it was just too much. I also didn’t find the characters as likeable as I have in some other Lucy Score books. I said to my friend if I am acting this way in my 30’s feel free to slap me across the face. I found that Luke and Harper were so immature for the their ages and I got sick of their hate sex very quickly. That isn’t a trope that is for me and it drives me nuts.

The story itself felt very rushed and just like the author wanted to get something out on the shelves for a quick cash grab. I did think it was a cute story but the execution of it was just very poor and didn’t hit as hard as her other books.

There were also way too many sex scenes in this book and I was quickly rolling my eyes at these two. They felt more like two hormonal teenagers than adults. It was crazy.

The final conflict was also very disappointing. I was so bored and felt like I got nothing out of it.

I will be continuing this series as I have borrowed them from my library but I'm hoping more care is put into the other two books.