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A review by marufahoque
Mark of Loyalty by Sarah K.L. Wilson
4.0
I now wish THIS was an actual show and not the garbage they have now (like GoT).
The only reason I don't give it five stars is because of the errors and modern jargon that could be edited to fit the fantasy story without needing to explain to the readers (trust us to get it!). Also, I don't like the fact that it's in PAST tense. It should be in present tense and it'd be better in my opinion if Amel would just speak to her dragon sometimes, and not think things in third person and have the dragon answer in present tense. It would be so much easier to read and understand this way.
The only reason I don't give it five stars is because of the errors and modern jargon that could be edited to fit the fantasy story without needing to explain to the readers (trust us to get it!). Also, I don't like the fact that it's in PAST tense. It should be in present tense and it'd be better in my opinion if Amel would just speak to her dragon sometimes, and not think things in third person and have the dragon answer in present tense. It would be so much easier to read and understand this way.