samiamedley 's review for:

4.0

the book transitions from 3rd person to 1st person in writing halfway through sentences sometimes, or from past tense to present (shes telling a story

I like its theory of modernity, as a resistance to change instead of progress
“i told her about you” (January writing in her journal) Addressing the diary?
I also hate the “and then he forgets everything” line of plot, because it serves no purpose. Like Samual and Jane just could have been further behind, waiting for her. or in jail. why erase memories? Also why not write “he remembers”