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shelbythebelby 's review for:
Say Your Prayers
by Kathryn Moon, Crystal Ash
This was good! I liked that it wasn't typical to most reverse harem stories I've read and didn't have everyone together in one big relationship and instead had a few separate relationships between the members of the group that were intertwined. The relationships and the story were largely enjoyable and fun, and the writing was good.
I did not care for how the FL began talking like a modern day teen/20something about 1/2 way through (which was called out by one of the MLs) when she had been trapped in hell for thousands of years. Why would she talk like a stereotypical "sassy" and "empowered" character, especially when she hadn't talked that way earlier in the story? It's an odd shift that happens pretty suddenly and doesn't make sense. Other than that though, a nice read!!!
I did not care for how the FL began talking like a modern day teen/20something about 1/2 way through (which was called out by one of the MLs) when she had been trapped in hell for thousands of years. Why would she talk like a stereotypical "sassy" and "empowered" character, especially when she hadn't talked that way earlier in the story? It's an odd shift that happens pretty suddenly and doesn't make sense. Other than that though, a nice read!!!