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So You Want to Be a Villain? by ErraticErrata
4.0

Good: Serious page turner, generally great writing. And the magic system is super cool.

Bad: This is a free thing on the internet and has defintiely never seen a pro-editor. It's still really good and I hardly noticed but if you are the type to lose your sh!t over a typo this is not the fic for you.

Ugly: A randian protaganist who sees morality is just a social construct, there are definitly no social or psychological tolls for committing atrocities, cause she is too smart and logical for that. This is one of the least offensive variants of this trope but I'm jsut so tired of it that I'm still going to pass on the rest of the series.