thatcydney 's review for:

Behind the Forecast by Evie Daniels

DID NOT FINISH: 63%

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DNFd @ 63%…this didn’t work for me 🥲 there were way too many inconsistencies, a lot of awkward dialogue, and some instances of feeling like narrative or dialogue used to exist but was removed abruptly and the surrounding sections weren’t changed to reflect that. Tenses change at times. If Eden and Dawson come from families with money it doesn’t make sense to me that they have multiple jobs lol leave the job market to the people who need it, bucko! Eden was childish and Dawson wasn’t as charming as he thought he was.