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A review by shannonreese
Changed by Heather Dahlgren
2.0
The story had a LOT of promise, and I wish it would have been a little different like she wanted revenge but ended up falling too far in love, but this just wasnt it for me unfortunately. There was a lot of spelling mistakes that made it difficult to concentrate and the dialogue seemed a bit forced. I also dont care for when 2 charecters are having a conversation and say the others name in every sentence, it also makes it a bit distracting.
Overall I think the writer has really good potential as I first stated, I think she should stick with it, this is only one of the first books as she mentioned that she wrote and we all start somewhere! ❤
Spice: 6/10
Plot: 5/10
Ease of reading: 4.8/10
Overall I think the writer has really good potential as I first stated, I think she should stick with it, this is only one of the first books as she mentioned that she wrote and we all start somewhere! ❤
Spice: 6/10
Plot: 5/10
Ease of reading: 4.8/10