A review by jessicainanook
The Alpha's Son by Penny Jessup

2.0

This reads as a fanfiction that was never edited to become a book. I enjoy fanfiction. I can imagine enjoying this fanfiction. The problem with copypasting a fanfic into a book is that it doesn't usually work. Most times, heavy edits are needed for a cohesive storyline to emerge. Not to mention the need to add world and character building to round it out.
Fanfics have source material.
Books only have themselves.