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Runaway Omega
by Ember L. Nicole
Broken Omega
I struggled a bit with this broken omega story, but it has lots of potential. The concept was really great, but the execution was a bit lacking. There were a lot of repetitive lines (like the character restating something they already said on the page prior), the constant ‘I’m leaving’ ‘I’m not staying’ from the FMC. It got really annoying after the first dozen or so times she said it. I also wasn’t a huge fan of the spicy scenes. It’s like the author tried to provide as much detail as possible, but was seriously lacking the sizzle.
Not entirely sure I recommend this, as it’s really long and definitely a time commitment for a story I didn’t really get much out of.
I struggled a bit with this broken omega story, but it has lots of potential. The concept was really great, but the execution was a bit lacking. There were a lot of repetitive lines (like the character restating something they already said on the page prior), the constant ‘I’m leaving’ ‘I’m not staying’ from the FMC. It got really annoying after the first dozen or so times she said it. I also wasn’t a huge fan of the spicy scenes. It’s like the author tried to provide as much detail as possible, but was seriously lacking the sizzle.
Not entirely sure I recommend this, as it’s really long and definitely a time commitment for a story I didn’t really get much out of.