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A review by charleyyyyy
Babel: An Arcane History by R.F. Kuang
3.5
I have mixed feelings on this book. It had its strong points and it had its weak points.
I can definitely see why there is so much hype around this book. Most people will agree that it's strongest point is the theme of colonialism, racist systems as a whole, and the violence and action needed to combat it. It certainly packs a punch. And a kick. And another punch. It never shys away from making a strong statement and saying what needs to be said.
However, there is a lack of nuance in the way this theme is writen, it was all telling no showing. Everything is told to you, the reader has no opportunity to think on these things for themselves. Also the ending contradicts everything the book was trying to say???
I liked the magic system. It was realy well developed and so subtle that it felt like it could almost be real. It blended in realy well with this story and its setting.
The plot started out slow, and a tad boring, but it builds into something compulsively readable and heartbreaking. It's clear that so much research went into this book, and while I admire that, the information was often dumped on us. This made the book feel quite dense.
The charicters were underdeveloped, which greatly impacted my enjoyment of this book.
I could not tell you a thing about Victoire's personality, which is an issue because of how much of an important charicter she is. Rami is my favourite charicter, and even him I don't feel like I know beyond a surface level. Even our main charicter, Robin, was lacking in depth. There was supposed to be a strong moral dilemma Robin was going through, but he wasn't developed enough for it to be convincing. His charicter development was interesting, but again not as good as it could have been, if he was a more fleshed out charicter.
I did not feel the strong bond they were supposed to have as a group, which is an issue when the bond starts to break. How can I feel the bond breaking if i didn't feel the bond in the first place? At one point one of the charicters says to another "we would have died for you" and I was like really??? I was not getting the feeling that they were that close at all, this was so unbelievable.
My biggest issue with this book was how Ramy was treated, and the queer baiting.
Ramy and Robin had something going on between them that was definitely more than friendship, but nothing is ever confirmed or said outright. On either their feelings for each other or their sexualitys. It's a 'not confirmed, not denied' situation, which is sooooo frustrating. I literally googled " is Ramy from Babel queer?" and even google couldnt confirm or deny. Its in the context but not explicit :( (This is incredibly similar to what happened with a charicter from Kuang's other series, the Poppy War trilogy, with Chaghan and Altan. I also had to google if they were queer, and got no answer.) And then it gets worse;because Ramy is killed. Its 'bury your gays' at its finest. The queer(coded, unconfirmed) charicter is killed before we get any development or confirmation on his queerness or his and Robins relationship. And its so frustrating. The bury your gays trope, and queer baiting is getting old. Also, the Indian (queer?) charicter is murdered by the white girl for the M.C's development, and for what??? The white person wins and the queer poc sufferers in this situation. I hated the ending. The queer (???) Poc charicters die and they dont even win bc of it. Why didnt they fight for their right to live??? And then Robin must sacrifice himself??? why was this the ending???? The trope of the POC charicters dying/getting sacrificed so the white people can develope as charicters is so harmful??? This ending contradicts everythring the book was trying to say in the begining.
I can definitely see why there is so much hype around this book. Most people will agree that it's strongest point is the theme of colonialism, racist systems as a whole, and the violence and action needed to combat it. It certainly packs a punch. And a kick. And another punch. It never shys away from making a strong statement and saying what needs to be said.
However, there is a lack of nuance in the way this theme is writen, it was all telling no showing. Everything is told to you, the reader has no opportunity to think on these things for themselves. Also the ending contradicts everything the book was trying to say???
I liked the magic system. It was realy well developed and so subtle that it felt like it could almost be real. It blended in realy well with this story and its setting.
The plot started out slow, and a tad boring, but it builds into something compulsively readable and heartbreaking. It's clear that so much research went into this book, and while I admire that, the information was often dumped on us. This made the book feel quite dense.
The charicters were underdeveloped, which greatly impacted my enjoyment of this book.
I could not tell you a thing about Victoire's personality, which is an issue because of how much of an important charicter she is. Rami is my favourite charicter, and even him I don't feel like I know beyond a surface level. Even our main charicter, Robin, was lacking in depth. There was supposed to be a strong moral dilemma Robin was going through, but he wasn't developed enough for it to be convincing. His charicter development was interesting, but again not as good as it could have been, if he was a more fleshed out charicter.
I did not feel the strong bond they were supposed to have as a group, which is an issue when the bond starts to break. How can I feel the bond breaking if i didn't feel the bond in the first place? At one point one of the charicters says to another "we would have died for you" and I was like really??? I was not getting the feeling that they were that close at all, this was so unbelievable.
My biggest issue with this book was how Ramy was treated, and the queer baiting.
Ramy and Robin had something going on between them that was definitely more than friendship, but nothing is ever confirmed or said outright. On either their feelings for each other or their sexualitys. It's a 'not confirmed, not denied' situation, which is sooooo frustrating. I literally googled " is Ramy from Babel queer?" and even google couldnt confirm or deny. Its in the context but not explicit :( (This is incredibly similar to what happened with a charicter from Kuang's other series, the Poppy War trilogy, with Chaghan and Altan. I also had to google if they were queer, and got no answer.) And then it gets worse;
Content Warnings
Graphic: Colonisation, Confinement, Racism, Violence, Hate crime, Grief, Blood, Racial slurs, Suicide, Torture, Classism, Death, Gun violence, Misogyny, and War
Moderate: Child death, Slavery, Toxic friendship, and Car accident