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lalala_rissa 's review for:

Little Dove by Layla Frost
DID NOT FINISH: 70%

MFC is a child in her interactions, dialogue, depth, even when she turns 18. I considered DNF at 1/3 but was hoping it'd get better, but no character development. Writing was boring, no feels, weak spice. Decided at chapter 27 to DNF and skip to the last chapter and epilogue, which were also blah and meh.