A review by dilan11
Harry, Revised by Mark Sarvas

3.0

For the first couple of chapters, I felt like Mr. Sarvas was just trying too hard - too many metaphors, too many cute references, too many jokes. However, the story really held my attention from about 50 pages in right to the very end. I suspect that Mr. Sarvas will be a very good novelist, which is unusual for someone who is such a good critic (The Elegant Variation blog). I look forward to his sophomore effort.