A review by alyssastag
It Ends with Us by Colleen Hoover

dark medium-paced

• Plot- or character-driven? Plot
• Strong character development? No
• Loveable characters? No
• Diverse cast of characters? No
• Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

1.0

Some stories should stay on Wattpad. None of the characters feel believable, most are honestly embarrassing. Even her diary entries don’t sound like they were written by a teenager. The Ellen obsession is so weird. The jokes did not hit. The timeline of the story is also odd. Sometimes a new chapter is months after the previous one, and others are just moments apart. She uses way too many exclamation points. Her language is really cringe and just doesn’t sound good.

She should have just gotten an abortion like ?? And the DORY at the end was so dumb. The whole ending annoyed me it should’ve been more open. Nevertheless, I enjoyed hate/reading it.