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A review by cutenanya
The A.I. Who Loved Me by Alyssa Cole
3.0
I'm screaming "What a pity!!!" at the top of my lungs. Dear Miss Cole, please tell me this is an abridged version and you have a full length version sitting in your computer? With such awesome characters, setting and plot line, how can you write a story so short. There's little time for character development or world building. So much more could be explored like:
1) Trinity's personal story;
2) Trinity & Li Wei's backstory (not enough)
3) The Hive corporation
And on and on. I'm not sure if this book is a complete standalone or part of a series (seems like the latter as there seems to be another book about another character) but really Miss Cole, just please expand this book. It's got all the potential to be a 5-star book, but you must expand the plot, polish the world building, add more depth to character development.
P.S. Li Wei could easily be my favorite male character of the year but there's inadequate story about him. What a pity (cries). I love Li Wei, I envy Trinity so much though I will not trade places with her. I don't want to battle AI anytime soon though I sincerely wish I can get an AI who can chat with me before I part with this world.
1) Trinity's personal story;
2) Trinity & Li Wei's backstory (not enough)
3) The Hive corporation
And on and on. I'm not sure if this book is a complete standalone or part of a series (seems like the latter as there seems to be another book about another character) but really Miss Cole, just please expand this book. It's got all the potential to be a 5-star book, but you must expand the plot, polish the world building, add more depth to character development.
P.S. Li Wei could easily be my favorite male character of the year but there's inadequate story about him. What a pity (cries). I love Li Wei, I envy Trinity so much though I will not trade places with her. I don't want to battle AI anytime soon though I sincerely wish I can get an AI who can chat with me before I part with this world.